Once, There Was Love

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Once, there was love around them, now it’s gone.

Photo © Joanna Kitchener

Once, there was love around them, now it’s gone. It lasted for a very long time, then crumbled down in minutes. But in that time, the love was real, the love was deep, the love was true.

You could deem the tenderness when his hand took hold of her hand tightly, didn’t want to lose his woman; the mother of his daughter, the lady he felt fond of. And if you saw her smile flared up along with a face that brightens in split-second after the man came, you’ll remark there was affection, a beautiful one. Then you’ll trust there was really that particular emotion if you witness their gaze upon looking at each other, two people saying love with two pairs of eyes, made their heart beat at the same pace; you should’ve trust there was love, the true one.

Even when it’s gone, the memory lingering still in their mind, it’s not bad, they just need to treasure it as a wonderful story happened in their life, and then move along to the next chapter.

The time they’ve spent together is something they shouldn’t regret, for they were madly in love that time and it was marvelous.

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Note:

  1. Posted here, Editor:  Rin. Old writing with some edits.
  2. I wanted to describe love by other words in the second paragraph and used the word only once and failed LOL.
  3. Kalo kalian somehow mau nyari foto couple in the wild, just visit Joanna Kitchener’s Flickr, or if you want to read a story about elopement and wedding in pictures go to her blog, soooo great.
  4. And yes ofc feel free to correct or give me an advice for any part.
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6 thoughts on “Once, There Was Love

  1. dua kali baca, dua kali baper juga. aku kayaknya pernah baca di blog sher yang khusus fic english itu deh, tapi lupa apakah sempet drop komen apa engga huhu maafkeuuun :”(( terus taunya direpost di siniii, terus baca, terus… yah :” asli deh aku suka kalo sher udah bawa yang gloomy, sad begini ahahah.
    btw mau ngasi pendapat dikit deh. bagian: “Then you’ll trust there was really that particular…” kok kayaknya enakan: “Then you’ll believe that there was really that particular…” eh tapi cmiiw ya sheer, soale aku kan kalo bikin kalimat inggris pake feeling wkwkwk xD pabila ku salah kasihtau aku yaaa ehe.
    yosh! keep writing sher ❤ ❤

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    1. Santai aja kali kak hahaha, I don’t really concern about comment or on that one blog, comment is great, like is enough 😉 Soalnya kebawa sama kebiasaan susana di sana (!?) (Lah ini malah cerita). Aku udah lama gak nukis gloomy nih :'(:'(:'(

      Artinya sama, tapi mungkin maknanya beda tipis kak hehehe, maybe I’ll change it. Anyway, thank you for your visit and the review, kak ♥♥♥

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  2. TARI IM BUBAR JALAN TARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!! KALO DIUMPAMAKAN ANIME INI ONE PUNCH MAN. YHES! SEKALI TONJOK AKU BUYAR AMBYAR BABLAS!!! ❤ KUCINTA KUSUKA KU-ADORE DIKSIMU TAREEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ❤ ❤

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